I like that you've tried to make the window shape, but be careful with your line breaks so that the words/sentences aren't too broken up and it lacks clarity. Remember there should be 3 compositions + a reflection on the text.
There are 3 compositions here, but they're still quite sloppy (the author would be horrified!) and you've still not reflected on the content of the text!
I like that you've tried to make the window shape, but be careful with your line breaks so that the words/sentences aren't too broken up and it lacks clarity. Remember there should be 3 compositions + a reflection on the text.
ReplyDeleteThere are 3 compositions here, but they're still quite sloppy (the author would be horrified!) and you've still not reflected on the content of the text!
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